Image by Chairman Jansen van Rensburg

something in me loved to explore
the vast stretches of savanna grassland
behind our house
which was on the outskirts of the community

didnโ€™t know why
perhaps the mixture of danger and pleasure
scattered into the inviting aura hanging over the place
for as you journeyed deeper, the grass grew taller
and so did the probability of running into thick poisonous snakes

the barrier separating safety from danger was a deep gully, mostly dry due to the prolonged drought that combed the northern part of the country like some sad lonesome ghost

some nights, singing and drumming from the village across the deep valley circled the bonfires they made, floating in the direction of our houses, following us even into our dreams

perhaps this quest for adventure means something
and that something, only time can tell


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13 responses to “Inviting aura”

  1. So beautifully expressed, Benji. Loved it.

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธIndiraโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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  2. hi, Benjiโฃ๏ธ

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live until next Monday:

    W3 Prompt #228: Weaโ€™ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy!

    ~David

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    1. OK. Thank you โค๏ธ Davidโค๏ธ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. Interesting thoughts Benjamin

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    1. Thank you โค๏ธSadjeโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Youโ€™re welcome

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  4. Benjamin this word painting is vivid! So many layers kept me reading and reading again!!

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  5. As an adult, did the inviting aura cease, or was this childlike curiosity and need explore something that still lives within you?

    you’ve created a deeply resonant atmosphere, Benjamin.

    thank you for joining in.

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    1. Thank you for your comments ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธโค๏ธ

      I have to reignite this childlike curiosity …I believe it wasn’t there by coincidence

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