staring straight at a new dawn

Was growing up into a great donkey

A sweet donkey everyone sat on

And decided which direction it should go

Walking miles in heat and discomfort

Swallowing my complaints, careful to not spit them on gold diggers

Didn’t even know I’ve got places of my own to go

Finally found my path rather late

Finally found peace

Staring straight at the new dawn

No turning back to a screaming past trying to hold me back

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/08/08/what-do-you-see-146-august-8-2022/


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14 responses to “staring straight at a new dawn”

  1. […] Benjamin; Staring straight at a new dawn […]

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  2. great take Benjamin! πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Thanks so much, Cindy.

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      1. we;come!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  3. An encouraging piece, Benjamin! Well done.

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    1. Thank you so much, Eugenia. I am touched by your sweet words.

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    1. ❀️ Janice ❀️

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  4. Wonderful piece, Benjamin. Love it.πŸ’•

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    1. Thank you so much, Grace. I deeply appreciate the encouraging feedback.

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      1. Truly my pleasure πŸ’•

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  5. Very inspiring poem Benjamin. Thanks for joining in

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    1. You are welcome, Sadje. It’s always a pleasure contributing.

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      1. πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ

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