Image by Salim Da

returning home on foot after work
through a shortcut behind houses
poorly planned
bumped into a lady burning weed
after sweeping her backyard
the scent of herbs reminds me
of my childhood
when I used to follow dad to the farm
my happiest moments were in the afternoons
when we paused for the lunch
of roasted yam with agushi stew
A mouse or two hovering over hot coals
from their long poles
as if in prayer, dripping with oil
here I was, a city boy missing village life
some village teen seated somewhere in a village daydreaming of life in a city they might never see


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32 responses to “The scent of herbs”

  1. […] thanks to Benjamin Nambu for his inspirational prompt.Gratitude, as always, to David of The Skeptics Kaddish, without whom […]

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  2. […] Benjamin’s prompt: The quiet we longed […]

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  3. […] Skeptic’s Kaddish, W3 Prompt # 218 is given to us by Poet of the Week, Benjamin Nambu. The prompt: When life becomes overwhelmingly busy, we often dream of having time to ourselves. We […]

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  4. What a wonderful pom , Benji. Yout prompt challenge is so moving. Recalling so many moments, for which I still feel guilty. Congrats, Our POW.

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    1. Thank you so much ❤️Indira❤️😊🙏. The past is lessons. What matters is sifting the lessons and moving on. Have a blessed day my friend!

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      1. So true. 💖💖💖. My best wishes, Benji.

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  5. Your poem creates a moving and truly atmospheric scene, Ben.

    I’m intrigued and fascinated by these lines:

    “A mouse or two hovering over hot coals
    from their long poles
    as if in prayer, dripping with oil”

    Congrats on being Poet of the Week 💗

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    1. Thank you for your kind words. I deeply appreciate them❤️❤️🙏😊 . Have a blessed day!

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      1. Thank you. You too 🤗

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        1. You’re welcome 😊

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  6. Beautiful piece Benjamin it highlights a universal truth: we rarely crave where we are, but rather where we used to be, or where we imagine we could be ❤️

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    1. Absolutely. I agree with you❤️❤️😊🙏 Thank you for taking time to read my poem and comment

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  7. Wonderful poem!

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    1. Thank you❤️❤️😊

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  8. Benji, I really like how your ending shows that people often want what they do not have, with the city boy missing village life while a village teen dreams of living in the city.

    ~David

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    1. Thank you ❤️David❤️😊🙏

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  9. Hi Benjamin,

    I have gone back to reread this poem so many times! Something about it touches me and I’m not sure I can find the words for it. To me, that a sign of good art — when words escape me. Well done. I’ve chosen you as Poet of the Week.

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    1. Wow! Thank you so much ❤️Sally ❤️ for choosing me as Poet of the Week and for such encouraging words. I deeply appreciate it 🙏😊

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      1. You deserve it. I can’t wait to see what prompt choose for next week.😊

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      2. hi, Benji ❤

        Mazal tov on being selected as our new PoW!

        I’ve emailed you with ‘next steps’, but if you haven’t received an email from me for some reason, please contact me directly at:

        DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM

        Thanks so much!

        ~David

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        1. Hello ❤️David❤️. I am deeply honored to be chosen as Poet of the Week. Keep up the good job of hosting Wea’ve Written weekly. I will surely respond to your email 🙏😊❤️

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  10. I love this poem. It tugs at my heart and brings tears to my eyes although I don’t know why. It’s the homesickness juxtaposed with the thought of “some village teen seated somewhere in a village daydreaming of life in a city”

    Excellent writing

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    1. Thank you so much ❤️Sally❤️ …your comments are deeply touching…I really appreciate your thoughts. Have a great weekend !

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  11. I love how a smell can transport you to another place so vividly. The end of the poem, showing the way we always dream of what we do not have, was powerful.

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    1. Thank you so much ❤️Bridgette ❤️🙏😊 Happy weekend !

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  12. This is outstanding, Benjamin.

    You capture a moment in time that contrasts the rich smell of the agushi stew and the image of a village child dreaming of the city. It creates a powerful picture of two worlds watching each other from afar.

    Very effective. And affecting.

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    1. Thank you ❤️Josie❤️ 😊🙏 . I deeply appreciate the time you took to read and leave such an insightful comment. Have a blessed day !

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