Diary of a Wanderer

For dreamers, drifters, and those becoming.

salty guilt

Image by Seyda Nur Ugur

she leans
against the wall
hands at her back, face down
salty guilt eroding her
make-up

layers of sadness
arranged like a cascade hook
her drooping shoulders

W3 Prompt #213: Wea’ve Written Weekly

Benjamin Nambu

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9 responses to “salty guilt”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar
    Reena Saxena

    Wonderful! You put it together very well.

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar
      Benjamin Nambu

      Thank you ❤️Reena❤️ for your kind words 🙏😊 Happy weekend to you and your family !

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  2. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Great job on this, Benjamin💕

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar
      Benjamin Nambu

      Thank you ❤️Cindy❤️. I deeply appreciate your kind words. Happy weekend to you and your family 🙏

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        You’re so very welcome, my friend ed! Thanks so much!! I will! You too! ♥️

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          Benjamin Nambu

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar
    poetisatinta

    Benjamin, a poignant and visually evocative piece of writing, it captures a heavy, private moment of emotional collapse with striking clarity – great title and visuals 🙌

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar
      Benjamin Nambu

      Thank you so much for your kind words. I deeply appreciate them🙏💕

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      1. poetisatinta Avatar
        poetisatinta

        You are very welcome 🩷

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