opening the cage

my departure time approaches
my heart pulsates with anticipation
it all seems like an unbelievable dream

and the sight of
travelers verifying tickets
arriving taxis offloading luggage
finely dressed passengers finishing off goodbye messages to onlookers who came to see them off

sends gentle shock waves of excitement throughout my body

as varieties of whiffs of sweet-scented perfumes whisk past me

even the morning sun struggles to mask its delight behind the soothing breeze inflating our  clothes, and sweeping long hairs into wild poses

many days of
wondering where my life was headed
wandering lazily in the neighborhood
snoring on the couch with my mouth hanging open

were now over

a new life of fresh adventures lay ahead in this new destination
although I know not if it would be worth the trouble

but one thing was certain
the old cage was open
the decision to step out
or remain shielded in its warmth
was now mine to make

8 responses to “opening the cage”

  1. Wow, really enjoyed the poem.

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    1. Thank you ❤️Pooja❤️ for making time to read my poem and leaving a note. Have a great day !

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      1. My pleasure and have a great day too! ❤️

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  2. A very interesting take Benjamin. You’ve left it at the juncture where we can imagine it’s ending ourselves thanks for joining in

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    1. You’re welcome ❤️Sadje❤️ Always a pleasure participating in wdys 🙏

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      1. 🙏🏼♥️🙏🏼

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  3. I love how this ended.🫶

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    1. Thank you🙏 Have a wonderful day 💕

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