It’s like a spell
Like some decree
Something worth having
Is rarely found in public spaces
It lurks in shadows
Playing hide and seek
Entering rooms that refuse to open
To visitors
Except stubborn intruders
Who keep knocking
Refusing to back off
Till a locked door’s hinges
Become weak
And fall apart
To the determined
An obstacle is only
something that opens


11 responses to “To the determined”

  1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    A wonderful poem to the prompt, Benjamin!!! 💓

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar

      Thank you, ❤️Cindy❤️🙏😊

      Happy weekend to you and your family!

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You’re so welcome and you as well!!! 💓

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        1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar

          Thank you 🙏

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  2. GraceoftheSun Avatar

    Amazing poem, Benjamin. Truly enjoyed. 💕

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar

      Thank you, ❤️Grace❤️🙏😊 Happy weekend to you and your family!

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      1. GraceoftheSun Avatar

        My pleasure. Likewise, my friend.💕

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  3. P. J. Gudka Avatar

    Loved the poem 😊

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    1. Benjamin Nambu Avatar

      Thanks, ❤️Pooja❤️🙏😊

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      1. P. J. Gudka Avatar

        You’re most welcome 😊❤️

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