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One sea, Two scenes

Birds on a seashore
Tweeting gleefully, like kids on a seesaw
Familiar notes, like those of a theme song
Positive vibes, for the weak and strong

Waves, heaving like a sleeping dragon
Its patience, creaking like a weeping wagon
Fuming, like a seething Python
All its theatrics, fleeting, bygone

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17 responses to “One sea, Two scenes”

  1. Love this, Benjamin . Great rhythm and rhyme. Fabulous piece, wonderful take.πŸ’•πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’•

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    1. Thank you so much, Grace. Your comments are very touching and encouraging.

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      1. Truly my pleasure. Keep shining.πŸ’•

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  2. Very well written Benjamin. πŸ‘πŸΌ

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    1. Thank you so much, Sadje. πŸ’• πŸ’• 😊

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  3. Theatrics, positive and negative superbly expressed, Benjamin. The whole world is a stage more than ever these days.

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    1. Yep. So true. Thanks, Eugenia.

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      1. Most welcome, Benjamin.

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  4. I loved it, it’s a very rhythmic poem and well-written.

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    1. Thank you very much. I deeply appreciate the time you took to read and comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  5. Wow, Benjamin – I adore this piece!

    ❀
    David

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    1. Thank you so much, David. This means a lot to me. πŸ’• πŸ’• 😊

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  6. This flows so well, great piece! β™₯️🌹β™₯️

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    1. Thanks, Tricia. I am delighted to see you stop by and comment. I deeply appreciate it. πŸ’•

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      1. I love reading great poems!! πŸ’

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