Sometimes I’m confused
I do not know
if I’m on the right track
I’m tempted
To prune my wild self
So I can fit into the picture
That offends no one
These wild shoots
They grow back
As soon as they’re cut
It’s scary
Walking alone
No wonder so many voices get drowned
In the echoes of the masses
This reflective poem captures the universal struggle of individuality versus conformity. Through its concise yet evocative imagery, you explore feelings of confusion, fear, and the tension between embracing one’s true self and adhering to societal expectations.
The poem’s central theme—balancing authenticity with the pressure to conform—is highly relatable. Lines like “I’m tempted to prune my wild self” resonate with anyone who has felt the urge to suppress their uniqueness to avoid judgment.
The metaphor of “wild shoots” growing back despite being cut is particularly striking. It suggests resilience and the inevitability of one’s true self emerging, no matter how much it is suppressed.
The poem conveys vulnerability, particularly in lines like “It’s scary / Walking alone.” This raw honesty invites readers to reflect on their own fears of isolation and self-expression.
Despite its brevity, the poem delivers a powerful message. The line “No wonder so many voices get drowned / In the echoes of the masses” serves as a poignant critique of societal pressures that stifle individuality.
Nicely written, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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