A soothing song sat softly on her mind all day and wouldn’t leave, like the way her story was trapped in that old dress and wouldn’t fade. The moving notes guided her fingers groping the margins of her heart for the right words to describe what that dress had come to symbolize for her.


Although time has hemmed her to death, years upon years have lip-synced and hummed her dress, but none has ever been able to truly sing its symbol.


The tenants are no more, but this old dress has lived to tell stories that once slept here.

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14 responses to “A living canvass”

  1. eunice Avatar

    In fact, you have great titles .

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    1. BENJAMIN NAMBU Avatar

      Thanks, Eunice. I deeply appreciate your taking the time to read through my pieces and comment. Your comments are very warm and sweet.

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  2. suespitulnik Avatar

    The word flow in your flash evoked visuals and feelings for me. Well done.

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      Thank you! I deeply appreciate the feedback.

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  3. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Love this last line “The tenants are no more, but this old dress has lived to tell stories that once slept here.”
    💕

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    Beautiful poem/story Benjamin

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome

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  5. Daily Poetry Avatar

    Wonderful piece of flash fiction, it touched me.

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    1. BENJAMIN NAMBU Avatar

      Thank you so much, sir. I am honored to hear that.

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  6. GraceoftheSun Avatar

    Amazing story , my friend . Love it.💕

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    1. BENJAMIN NAMBU Avatar

      Thank you, my dear Grace.

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      1. GraceoftheSun Avatar

        Always a pleasure 💕

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